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  • Archive Re: Disguise

    He felt like the ground had went out from under him. He let go of her, he felt pain being released into his bloodstream. He just stared at her. "How ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Kill

    He felt her tug gently on his lower lip with her teeth. "I love you." she whispered. He closed his eyes. Damn. What the hell was he suppost to say ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Archive Re: Disguise

    He shook his head. "I'm not leaving until you tell me why you're so angry." he said. She was hurting but she wouldn't tell him why. How was he suppost ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Kill

    **I'll be on for a while** He was a selfish asshole and he knew it. He picked her up and put her on his lap, he couldn't help himself he ...

    Jul 1, 2009
  • Archive Re: Disguise

    He stared at her, for a long time. Something was wrong. Had someone hurt her? If so they were going to hell right now! "Dawn, tell me what's wrong." he ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Kill

    Sterling nodded, understanding. "It's ok." he said. **blah**

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: Disguise

    It wasn't until the next morning until Dante woke up. He rolled over and moaned he hadn't slept the dreams had kept him from doing that. He looked at the ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Kill

    Sterling had no idea what she was talking about. Maybe she needed to be in a crazy house than a lake house in his arms. "I don't follow." he said. ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: Disguise

    The images that were flashing through his mind were of the past. He wanted to scream at the top of his lungs. It felt like he was living the past ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: Disguise

    Dante glared. "How the hell did you follow me?" he growled. He was standing in an dark alley way. "I just thought of you and here I am." she said ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Kill

    They were both on the couch before he even blinked, had he carried her? Or had they walked the entire way? He was confused but they were making out now. ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: Disguise

    **I have to go soon but I'll be back on in a few** He stormed in the alley way and thought of her face, Holly's face everything that had happened ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Kill

    **Great minds DO think alike holy cow :D ** Sterling felt a surge of pain pound through his heart. He didn't pull away, he cared for her. He would make ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: Disguise

    He waited for her to stop rambling. *Screw this.* He slammed her against the wall and crushed her mouth with his. He ran his thumb over her pulse. And felt ...

    Jun 30, 2009
  • Archive Re: The Kill

    The poor tortured soul. "Everything will be alright, Lina you may never remember any of that. And one day it may just come back to you. But until that day ...

    Jun 30, 2009


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